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So take up your mask child,
  let it shine and sing the world's song
  concealing pitiful soul beneth.

  pine pour creature
  let thy venomous thoughts eat at you
  so a mask is all that remains.

  amuse the masses with your shine
  dance and sing their songs
  oh frail creature bound behind.

  may the shadow of your light,
  be your mark to the worlds mocking light
©2006-2009 ~darkneko
:icondarkneko:

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a little ode to students' and their lives

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:iconcypress-crow:
that's..really sad..
*hugs u*
:icondarkneko:
yea its a little sad but then that was part of the idea
:iconrogueblonde86:
Definitely one of the darkest pieces you've written. It hurts thinking that people could actually live a life in that manner, and personally it makes me want to touch peoples lives-even stupid self-absorbed people with no clue. To be honest, the distant unfeeling critique kind of creeps me out. There seem to be undertones of anger towards these people that drive the poem, but you have to remember, for as many problems as they cause us and as much as they hurt themselves and others, if we don't show them God's love, who will?

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